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>> In Shadows
feat. Julia

Collect THIS :thumbsup: ;p
(and ya, a slightly less censored version is going on my wall)



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:iconalpersargin:
Excellent work... Love it...
Her eyes, backgroud all are perfect...
A bit too much light on her knee...




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Mutluluk yetinmektir...!
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2 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconshapsjo:
This stunning model is the subject of some skilled and exception photographic technics. The title in shadows, matches the jet black background. However the relatively
soft ligthting, so effectively used, leaves very little in shadows.
This leads to one point of criticism.
The positioning of the model is very strong from the waist up.
The image is sharp and the torso, slightly leaning forward, does suggest a "coming out of" the shadows. From the waist down,the image is "perhaps intentionally, a bit blured. It is also a little over exposed on the upper theigh. These two things distract from the excellence of the upper torso.
My suggestion is to tilt the model just a fraction more towards the camera so that the effect of her "coming out of the frame" exagerated a bit more and the same repositioning lowers her hemline just enough to make softening the image at her pelvis unnecessary for the sake of censorship.

Hope this helps! :)
JS
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:icondougthebear:
Nice portrait, does the model like it?

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:icontony566:
Impressive as usual

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:iconalashotokan:
Niiice indeed

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she does, there were plenty from this set and then I took her off from that stage and we did another set

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You deserve the praise

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:iconsaviourcorpses:
so good :9

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Nem tudtam, hogy lehetetlen, ezért megcsináltam...
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Sooo...
I don't have many critiques to make, apart from the fact that the image is a bit blurred from the waist downwards and that her left leg is maybe too lighted, confronted to the rest of the softened light (and for the title IN the shadows, as well).
But I love her position and expression. :) great job!

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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
1/125 second
F/4.5
44 mm
200
Jun 28, 2009, 3:48:59 PM

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